THIS IS AN EMERGENCY POST.
Well, I haven’t been eaten by a hellhound or kidnapped by an evil sorcerer but I am having an existential crisis. I was supposed to post something else today but I haven’t been able to finish writing it because I procrastinated yesterday and now I have to focus on my college applications and just sob into the void because of anxiety.
Anyway, this is an emergency post because I promised to myself that I won’t post this unless the need arises. Now that I don’t have any other post up my sleeve, you’ll have to deal with this one. I know I don’t NEED to post when I don’t have time but I know you all miss me and I want to leave this post right here so that you’ll feel my presence even for a bit. Or maybe you actually don’t miss me but I’m posting this anyway because not posting anything makes me anxious.
I KNOW. I’M TOTALLY RAMBLING NOW I NEED TO SHUT UP.
You probably don’t remember but in my post “My Days Without the Internet (ft. Mini Reviews)”, I mentioned that I have written a poem and I was not sure I was going to post it because I didn’t have the courage. Actually, I still don’t. But here you go:
POOR ATTEMPT AT POETRY #1
Once upon a time,
There was a girl
Who traveled through books
She leapt through pages
As if they were portals
That whisked her away
From the real world
She devoured words
As if they were faerie food
Trapping her
In a strange dimension
Of heroes and monsters
The more the girl traveled,
The more the edges blurred
Until reality faded
And fantasy won
The girl rejoiced
As she tasted freedom
Each story an escape
As much as an adventure
But one day,
The girl wondered
What life would be
Without her travels—
A world without magic,
Reality laid bare
With just the girl
And her demons.
The thought chilled her
But she knew
The stories and adventures
Won’t keep them at bay forever
So the girl strapped her armor,
And faced reality—
A hero at last
In her own story.
*buries self in my TBR pile* *emerges with difficulty*
AHHH I KNOW IT ISN’T MUCH. I still have to improve my poetry skills and eat a lot of chocolates for motivation. If you have tips on how I can improve my poetry, please let me know by leaving a comment.
SHOUT-OUT TO THE PEOPLE LIKE ME WHO TRY TO DO THINGS OUT OF THEIR COMFORT ZONE. You deserve 172 books, 37 Nazgul cloaks, and 16 enemy hearts.
Bye for now!
“A hero at last
In her own story.” I LOVE IT!
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Aww thank you so much Sam! This means so much to me 😭💖
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This is beautiful, please write more of these ❤
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This made my heart so full! I will try to write more. Thank you very much 😊
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I’m not good at peotry so I can’t give you any tips, but I can tell you, that this is already amazing. The ending is awesome!
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Thank you so much! 😭💙
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You know my thoughts already girl, I LOVE IT and if you want tips then…when I write a poem I try and remember it’s a story. It’s a different way of telling a story, less words, meaning you choose your words carefully they all must have impact in some way. It’s the same way I approach writing lyrics, just I have to figure out where to put the verses, pre chorus, chorus etc I’m still learning with lyrics. Poetry I’m more comfortable with these days ❤
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Thank you so much for the tips clo! They’re good advice. I’m so glad you loved a poem. I’m lucky to have a friend like you 😊
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❤ ❤ ❤
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This was beautiful!!! Have you ever read The Princess Saves Herself in This One?? I think you’d enjoy it if not 😊 xx
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SO GLAD YOU LOVED IT. I haven’t read that yet but I would love to! I heard many positive things about it and I absolutely love the title. Will add this to my TBR list 😄
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This is awesome! I LOVE this line
‘Until Reality Faded
And Fantasy Won’
because damn, I would love for it to happen to me ❤
Please continue writing. You look like you have some great ideas and I'm sure there'll be even more brilliant poetry being churned out in no time at all.
Ps: I suck at writing Poetry so feel free to take my advice with a bit of salt 🙂 Have a great day xx
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Thank you so much! This comment makes me so happy 😊❤
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I really REALLY love this a lot, Rain! Kudos to you for doing something that absolutely terrifies you and I encourage you to keep writing.
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Thank you so much, Kaleena! I will continue writing. I’m so happy with your words of encouragement 😊
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I really enjoyed your poem! Hope you will keep it up and post some more 🙂
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Ah I’m so glad you enjoyed it! I will try to post some more 😊
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It’s brilliant…loved your poem… write on…
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Thank you so much! So glad you loved it 😊
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Most welcome…my pleasure…
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Wow! This is incredible. Books really do transport us and take us on adventures! I loved the last few lines where you explained how she bravely faced the world and became a hero in her own story, that’s beautiful!
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AHHH I’M SO HAPPY YOU FOUND THIS POEM BEAUTIFUL. A comment like this makes me want to write more. Thank you 💕
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No problem! ❤️
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It’s not perfect but I love the theme of the poem, especially the ending! Pretty sure you’ll get better with more practice 😊
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Aww thank you! I will surely practice so that I can improve 😊
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